Comments on: The Amazing Gospelman

By: Scottie

Scottie — Fri, 19 Nov 2004 20:23:26 +0000

Dude, what a life to live. I’m the 18 yr old atheist goofball and I think that what you did to try to get to know your daughter was great, and I think that Catholism, Protestantism, religion in general is good… for the people who want to endower into the depths of the Bible, but I have faith in other methods of socialism and acceptance. Sheer open-minded thoughts. An open mind can solve the problem more than one way, and I believe that once you find a solution, try to find another one that works better. Anyways, good story and all that jazz. Peace.

By: Scottie

Scottie — Fri, 19 Nov 2004 20:23:00 +0000

By: Sarah

Sarah — Mon, 17 Nov 2003 23:36:31 +0000

If you were looking for some comments on how to polish the story, adding a little more symbolic value of the puddle would help. It was written well, with awesome clarity – however – tone only changed twice (making it feel like a longer story then it was). The ending seemed like you were so happy to be writing the ‘catchy part’, that it ended snappy (which was the second tone change).

By: Sarah

Sarah — Mon, 17 Nov 2003 23:36:00 +0000

By: Vic

Vic — Mon, 23 Jun 2003 14:02:16 +0000

The ending was kind of interesting. Maybe I’m too young, I don’t quite get the beginning of how the Gospelman had to do with the Linda or the author.

Keep up the good work Brian!

By: Vic

Vic — Mon, 23 Jun 2003 14:02:00 +0000

The ending was kind of interesting. Maybe I’m too young, I don’t quite get the beginning of how the Gospelman had to do with the Linda or the author.

Keep up the good work Brian!